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Describe the above car breaking down in 4 sentences.
"The old, bright, yellow sedan slowed down to a complete stop. Jasper saw smoke from the engine curl up from under its hood through the windshield. He was extremely upset, that he now would be late for his new, important job. Jasper grabbed his phone carelessly and dialled impatiently for help."
Remember a screenplay shows - it's visual.
If we wrote the above like a screenplay, it could look like this:
"The old, bright, yellow sedan slowed down to a complete stop. Jasper saw smoke from the engine curl up from under its hood through the windshield. He was extremely upset, that he now would be late for his new, important job. Jasper grabbed his phone carelessly and dialled impatiently for help."
Remember a screenplay shows - it's visual.
If we wrote the above like a screenplay, it could look like this:
